This is about how you have sumone and then when you think they're gonna be there forever they tell you they cant do this anymore...and they walk away..*sigh* terriable i kno...bti i do so enjoy this poem. comment please. lissa xox

My only suggestion for this..is to have it in stanza's some readers will just glance at it and leave because it seems like a story..just advice though 5/5 though
great job

This is a great poem also good job but i think it should have been put into stanzas lol sry thats the only thing that bugged but ti was still awesome good job i think u did a awesome job :D

keenan

Awesome poem i loved everyhting about but i agree it should have been put into stanza's.BUT its still awesome

XOkayla