I loved this poem! It was unusual and off beat, and that is rare to find! My favorite lines were
"try try try,
to no avail..
the puzzle pieces fall
as the riddle's solved
and the minds are whole
while the bodies confuse,.."

Awesome job! 5/5

~Anthony

I liked this...
It's cleverly written, you've used a good choice of words, and it read really well. It's a unique poem with some intersting ideas.
5/5 - Definately !!!

xxx cici xxx

I'm not entirely sure what it's about, but I did like the direct approach this piece had. I also liked how your stanzas were long but did not seem to drag on at all. I think you should end with a question mark in the first stanza.

I liked this it's well written and has a good structure. there was also something abotu itt (not sure what) which made it different and unique.