Comments : Poltergeist.

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Wow
    your poem is so good!!
    i love the way its written
    very detailed..
    if u could.. pls comment on my poem and tell me how i could improve..
    thanks
    k keep writting!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Great poem with great discription! it's creapy. better then my holloween poem lol! well done.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    This is really dark, nice work good poem and rhyming :) xox rc

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    A good halloween poem! Nice and creepy, especially when said with in the dark with a creepy kind of voice :D

    I liked it =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    Real awesome poem so detailed and describing it was scary but beatifully written
    take care
    HS

  • 18 years ago

    by beautiful-angel

    That was a good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    This one surely can run chills down your spine....awesome Steven, great job...

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Steven .....
    Wow I must say ....
    I'm still trying to get the goose bumps to settle ...LOL
    Awesome , incredible job my friend ...your use of words were definitely spine-chilling ..

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Thats really cool..its the kinda thing that makes ya wanna look over ya shoulder..very cool

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Whoa! that is a great poem! you use heaps of great imagery! i love it!