Wow
your poem is so good!!
i love the way its written
very detailed..
if u could.. pls comment on my poem and tell me how i could improve..
thanks
k keep writting!

Great poem with great discription! it's creapy. better then my holloween poem lol! well done.

~Jacklyn

This is really dark, nice work good poem and rhyming :) xox rc

A good halloween poem! Nice and creepy, especially when said with in the dark with a creepy kind of voice :D

I liked it =)

Real awesome poem so detailed and describing it was scary but beatifully written
take care
HS

That was a good poem

This one surely can run chills down your spine....awesome Steven, great job...

Love Ann

Steven .....
Wow I must say ....
I'm still trying to get the goose bumps to settle ...LOL
Awesome , incredible job my friend ...your use of words were definitely spine-chilling ..

Thats really cool..its the kinda thing that makes ya wanna look over ya shoulder..very cool

Whoa! that is a great poem! you use heaps of great imagery! i love it!