Addiction

by ella   Oct 31, 2005


Close your eyes
Take my hand
I'll take you to a place
You will never understand
As i wish away
My darkest sin
I hold you close
An take it all in
It reaches my head
An makes me light
I can't resist the urges
I can't put up a fight
My thought's are gone
My pain is free
My head is numb
It feels like me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Simple and sweet good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Si Chotic

    I really liked it.Very deep!

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good poem. It has a good rhyme scheme. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    The writting is great, but i agree with shadowedphoenix about adding another stanza to make it clearer

  • 18 years ago

    by Dana.

    OoO.I love this poem.Short.But oh so wonderful.Keep it goin'

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