Twisted Soul

by Justin Walker   Oct 31, 2005


Escape the pain is the goal
hurting less no matter the toll
why me?
who the hell are you?
to do what you do?
Call me names poke fun
Who? everyone
So i come back again
but this time i will win
Gun and knife
tooth and nail
ill kill them all
i must prevail
The wall painted red
and lined with the dead
My goal complete
my task done
i turn the gun on myself
in the end i won

Found this in the bottom of my backpack. Wrote this when i was very suicidal. I'm better now.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashlee

    Great job.. it made me cry.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Awesome
    i like it
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Whoa thats awesome, sad, dark, but yes, very awesome, I loved your rhyming and structure great job and thanks for the comment,

    Jess

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    I really enjoyed this short but very deep poem and am glad your better now 5/5
    Jennifer

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Really good, very powerful, your emotion is very clear.
    Good choice of words, glad your past all that now though !!

    xxx cici xxx

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