I give you a 4/5 cuz It was kinda confusin, but still a good poem.

Good poem... i know my bfs always on my mind..

Good poem I like it....good work
Julie

Dat was a cute poem, but it still had a lot of emotion in it, and good flow, very good piece

Well this poem is kinda confusing but its still cute and puts a smile on ur face i like it because its original nice work :]

I love this!! 10/10

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM I MEAN IT'S REAL SWEET

That was soo good!!!... i loved it!!..comment backk please....5/5 from me too haha

OMG!! I LOVE THIS ONE!!!
THIZ IS REALLY GUD REALL REALLY GUD!!! :)
WELL STOP BY AND COMMENT SOME OF MY IF U HAVE A CHANCE....

Is this about some1 close to u... its a good poem one of the best on here...

Hey this is a great poem. good job. keep up the good work.

Reli gd

and btw i am 11 :D
gd poem though :]

Hey hey! great poem, shows what love does to you. i love the emotion you put in to this. some of the silly little rhymres fit this piece really well! keep up the good work.. :D

Yeah its a sign
a sign for you to get with me! lol

This poem is so cute and sweet...and i love how you repeated your on my mine i like your style...keep writing...love always.
xoxo

When I see you
you're on my mind
I don't no what to do
cause you so damn fine
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I think the third line should be
" I dont know what to do"

Great job 5/5

I think the repertition of on my mind is really good and obviosly its called on your mind i really like that all the poetry ive read on this sitehas been really good. xx

WOW!!! this poem is so cute and I like how ur style of wiritng is...

I enjoyed reading this poem but i found the rhyming to be off, but that maybe just the way you write.
Overall its good

It is a cute love poem. I hope you win her heart someday. :-)