Comments : On my mind

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    I give you a 4/5 cuz It was kinda confusin, but still a good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by this love

    Good poem... i know my bfs always on my mind..

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Good poem I like it....good work
    Julie

  • 18 years ago

    by Dahna

    Dat was a cute poem, but it still had a lot of emotion in it, and good flow, very good piece

  • 18 years ago

    by Skai

    Well this poem is kinda confusing but its still cute and puts a smile on ur face i like it because its original nice work :]

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    I love this!! 10/10

  • 18 years ago

    by Muffin_N_Tae

    I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM I MEAN IT'S REAL SWEET

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was soo good!!!... i loved it!!..comment backk please....5/5 from me too haha

  • 17 years ago

    by SHoRTy

    OMG!! I LOVE THIS ONE!!!
    THIZ IS REALLY GUD REALL REALLY GUD!!! :)
    WELL STOP BY AND COMMENT SOME OF MY IF U HAVE A CHANCE....

  • 17 years ago

    by BrittBaby aka wonderwoman

    Is this about some1 close to u... its a good poem one of the best on here...

  • 17 years ago

    by denita

    Hey this is a great poem. good job. keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Reli gd

    and btw i am 11 :D
    gd poem though :]

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Hey hey! great poem, shows what love does to you. i love the emotion you put in to this. some of the silly little rhymres fit this piece really well! keep up the good work.. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Yeah its a sign
    a sign for you to get with me! lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    This poem is so cute and sweet...and i love how you repeated your on my mine i like your style...keep writing...love always.
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    When I see you
    you're on my mind
    I don't no what to do
    cause you so damn fine
    -------------------------

    I think the third line should be
    " I dont know what to do"

    Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    I think the repertition of on my mind is really good and obviosly its called on your mind i really like that all the poetry ive read on this sitehas been really good. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandy

    WOW!!! this poem is so cute and I like how ur style of wiritng is...

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryce

    I enjoyed reading this poem but i found the rhyming to be off, but that maybe just the way you write.
    Overall its good

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    It is a cute love poem. I hope you win her heart someday. :-)