Lost in love

by ShOrTy   Oct 31, 2005


U promised tht u would mean it
tht for once ud b the 1 tru
u promised me our hearts juss fit
but 5 months later its *ta heck wit u*
i always really loved u
and all u did was lie
u broke me heart and made me bleed
u made me sob and cry
so heres to us u f*ing fool
i hope ur happy i hope ur fine
wat u did was soo cruel
u jus crossed the line

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rae

    I like this poem. It has an energy. I for what happened if this is true, but know, your not alone. 5/5 definetely!! Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyle Schulz

    Great poem, I feel sorry for you for what he did, but your comeback in the ending was good. Your rhyming and frasing was superb and you content was very powerfull. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by mel

    I liked it, its really thought out and it flows. keep it up chika...

  • 18 years ago

    by XxCrazy4youxX

    ~* IM so srry if that true, i kno it must suck but stay strong and screw them cuz nobody worth ur time or tears if they like that 5++*~ XoXo

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