Brilliant! Kept my gripped the whole way through... I could have swarn it was me gasping for breath on the ledge :D

Another great peom that I enjoyed reading.

Simon

Well done my friend, well done!

Wonderfully done Steve, another superlative job!!!

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i loved it steve it was briliant! awsome awsome!! always keep writting! your very talented ^^

Whewww Steve ....
Thought I was going to have a panic attack just reading this one...You certainly kept my attention from beginning to end ...
The title fit perfectly....Wonderful job ...

Great job Steve....It surely kept me near the edge all the way through...

Love Ann

Great poem.... I enjoyed it. Well done!