This is simply so deep. Again another powerful last line. I love your quotes too, especially "Love me, Hate me, Kill me. In that order." What can I say? you have summed it up so perfectly.

Yeah its not one of your best poems but. . .

Hey, i'm back after a two day absence. lol. i really hought this one was very well written adn extremely meaningful.... science however isn't my thing, lol. that's not to say it wasn't brilliant
-Suzie xoxo

Awesome dude, loved every bit, keep going

Ohh wow, this is very deep and soooo beautiful. I am almost speechless, this poem touched my heart, so amazing and perfectly written...

*Hugs Sabrina*

Wow u seem sooo smart

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DOnt know why i said that
never mind
I know think its awesome
again great work
Em

Great peice. very well writen and quite original too

Deep, but is someone getting a bit bored in chemistry lessons? or should they really be keeping the science store cupboard locked?
Luv Helen xxx

Lol, nah the chemicals listed are used in the 'lethal injection'.
Thanks for the comment

Matt

Wow, that is a very goood poem my friend.
awsome technque, how ever you spell it....lol
well my friend you have a 5/5 from me