Sad To See You Shiver

by TheDevilHimself   Nov 1, 2005


It makes me sad to see you shiver
When you lie in bed and cry me a river

I cuddle up to you and try to cheer you up
But after all the things I do you wouldn't stop

I turn you around and look into your eyes
Filled with tears and fears of your cries

Try to talk to you but cant of all the emotion
While my heart is fully filled with sweet devotion

I wrap my arms round you and hug you tight
Pulls you closer and tells you it will be alright

I hear your tears falling down drip by drip
Slowly running away on your prowled lip

Your tears are falling on my chest one by one
And I will keep on holding you until you are done

Done with crying about all your fears
So you wont ever have to use again these tears

After hours of crying on my chest
You decided of lying away and get some rest

The whole night I was awake watching you
Thinking about everything you all been through

In the morning you woke up with a pretty smile
The last time I saw that has been a while

It makes me happy when you lie with me in bed
When I help you to get rid of everything making you sad

I love you and I will, forever in time
While you turn around and say, "you are always mine"

Thnx to Amie for the capitals, lol
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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    I think this is a beautiful write, it touched me greatly. though i think there're some typo errors.
    like,

    'Pulls you closer and tells it will be alright'

    '...tells you it will be alright'

    the first few lines are really great, it flows wonderfully, but i think the flow kind of go off in the middle. but still,maybe it's just me. =D

    anyway, just my point of view. i still think this is lovely, if a guy can write this for me.... that'll be... heaven. lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by PJ

    Beautiful wonderful poem babe, ur words are so sweet. I could keep reading this poem forever.

    Love u,

    ur gurl,

    pj xxx