I liked it but the flow was too fast. it felt rushed for some reason. i dont know why. i loved the words u used though.

PJ,
Well my friend...I'm guessing you know spanish since you're from Costa Rica...so, here we go. Mira, Rik es mi novio y me parese de muy mal gusto que le estes dejando mensajitos de amor. Por que mejor no te buscas un chico de tu pais. Rik ya tiene novia. Well, that's that. Take care and wish u the best.

Well he never told me he had a fiance. He told me he is single and very much in love with me. Why would I make something like that up? You need to get your priorities straight before you throw accusations at people you silly girl.

Me encanto este, corto pero muy lindo.
gracias por comentar en mi poema ^^

-pili-

It's amzing hun!! Keep up the great work!! Luvs Melissa

Great poem, I thought the diciton and flow was flawless. Very honest, raw and passionate work. Thought provoking with much visonary passion.

Thank you so much for your kind words on, check out my latest poem "Love and War" I would be interested in your opinion.

Many kisses
Hayley

That was a good poem i will enjoy to see more of em

What a fantastic poem babe=)
that really made me smile=) on the inside too xxx
well done
please write more
Damion...

5 star poem hope you're ok i haven't spoken to you in like a month hope you're ok love ya
mya