Comments : I wish I may.. I wish I might....

  • 18 years ago

    by Delanea

    So beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Wow THIS IS FANTASTIC, i do not know how you came up with such a wonderful idea but my dear this is breathtaking i lovedd it especially the first versee, well done hun i lubbz ittt

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Great poem again hun..i think i can relate to this one the most..and i really pictured all that so well done!!
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h an0ther amazing p0em written fr0m the hgeart. eartfelt sweetie keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    I wish I may..
    I wish I might..
    Be given a second chance
    To have you in my life..

    I love that line!! :( Its so sad!! This poems amazing.... it almost made me cry because I'm feeling the exact same way. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxxFull Of Painxxx

    U have sum really good poems they r really deep i love ur work

  • 18 years ago

    by Erin

    That was beautiful, i remember wishin on a star, it was something like that. well keep writin! as i say to everyone whos got talent......thanks for commenting mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Good poem
    I liked every line but actually the last line could have been more effective if you've put another sentence..I'm stupid Lol
    anyway keep up the good work
    lov ya
    Yours
    Nema
    XxXxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by chantelle nicole

    This is really deep you better publish these poems you could get mad money!!!!!!!!