If they dont notice you already, then you dont need to care about them. You only need yourself, maybe one friend, someone who actually cares and sees who you really are. n-e-wayz 5/5!
-elizabeth

Touching poem. Well written and well thought out. I hope to see a lot more. 5/5
--Sarah--

I feel your pain..I honestly do and ten times more. :( Drop me a line if you ever wanna chat.. I'll always be here if u need a friend. cheers... 5/5

Wow.
such a sad poem...so beautifully penned. i can see the scene happening, i can really see you standing in the streets with a gun to your forehead, i can see you slamming the door and crying...
marvelous.

No problem. the poem was marvelous and i think i should be thanking you for writing it...i truly enjoyed reading it. and im the same. most of the time i write when im feeling down. but alot of other times, as well.

Wow dat was a rlly sad poem but it was also very good

Imma cry....that was beautiful