Excellent poem and it really grasps the readers attention- capturing each and every description brilliantly.

Well done and keep writing :)...
Much love and God Bless,
FalLEn*-

Great poem i liked the ryhming and flow of it. great job

Hey. I like to leave comments, especially when I'm impressed. And I have no constructive ciriticism as I think it is perfect as it is. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope to see more from you!

This is not crap....
this is brilliant
so descripitive
so cool
I really liked it your added to my favs matt you should be proud
love
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I like it

It was great in the beginning. Caught attention and managed to maintain interest until somewhere in the middle where it nearly sounded forced for the rhyme scheme. But this was something impressive.
~Faith-less