This is a really good poem i liked it. Its very well written well keep up the good work and always remember to keep it real!
nikki

Really nice work . nice flow it doesnt sound forced good job
~HazE

Hey ya
great worked...agree wif nikki^^ it is weel ritin...keep it up
tc mwa luv dia xoxoxo

Such a deep yet true write. Loved it, 5/5. Em