Has the shadow I've been running from,
All along...been the shadow of me?

it just seems to really conclude this well. its really good! xox

This entire poem seems to build up to a climax. it finishes on notes that leave the reader with shivers (well I have shivers) which is all you can ask of a poem. wonderful

Ruby

That was an extremely brilliant write and it's flow was simply flawless ...
I loved it immensely ....a very impressive piece..

Wow! Very well expressed. You're a good poet! Keep up the great poetry!

((((Big Hugs))))

Michelle

I really like the way you use your words, it's very creative, and it reminds me of my poetry. It's really cool reading stuff written by someone else with the same thoughts and style. Awesome :D

Beautiful !!

xxx

Great poem. bulds though out to a brilliant ending.

Wicked! Amazingly written with emotion. A Pleasure to read. keep it up
Tara xxxx

Wow speechless this one is so good i love it!!!!!!! everything about it!!!