I no how u feel!
wat a great poem
well written and easy to empathise with.
5/5
xoxoxox
mary

The First Three Stanzas Were Pure Gold, I'm Highly Empressed With This Poem, It Was Beautifuly Brilliant, And You Have My Vote 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Great poem, I love the emotion. It was well thought out and beautifully written.

This is such an expresive poem, the only advice I have for you is to fix the ending a little, because it could sound better.

Very well directed poem you got here. I really enjoyed it alot actually. Enjoyed it and you did an amazing job. very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Great poem. thats the way it is with my friend, i like her and she like him, i had to get over it lol. good luck with that. =)

Kind of a shaky start, but a powerful middle. I would take out the last stanza and just add the first and third line of the last stanza together with the fifth stanza. Just so that the rhythm would stay the same throughout the poem.

"Please, I'm sorry,
But he's the one I truly love.
My friend, my one, my only,
He flies threw my heart like a dove."

But that's just me.

This situation sucks i know, so sorry bout that, anyways though this was a good poem a bit choppy in some areas but the overall flow is good the only spot worth pointing out is the very last stanza the last stanza is an important one in every poem the one you wrote for this is really bad it dosnt flow whatsoever it does rhyme but you can't tell because the flow is so off, id think about rewritng it but thats the only bad thing about this so 5/5 great job

It's a good poem. i know how you feel too. this happened to me before...though i regreted it later. but now it's even more difficult. great poem though.

Thats very beautiful....with this poem, i can tell that you are e very nice person...good for you.....5/5.....Check mine as well and write your comments i will appreciate that.....

I like most of it. it sort of sad and gently. but i dont really understand the ending.