Great Great Job this poem is really good and you have talen keep it up!!!
Leona

One word- marvellous.
whats the lie btw??
dhaval.

Thats really well written and I can relate to it so much. I can feel the pressure you have to keep hiding it in your words...
take care x0x0
P.S thankx for the comment, and yeah its how I really feel

WOW O.O Another fantastic poem like all the others =) I really loved it and relate to it so much that it scared me a little =P 5/5 ^.^
Rhea