Comments : Spinning Child

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    5/5 hun i seriously like this xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    Good write, liked it all the way through. The pronoun references became a little too much to handle. I think it was from constantly using the same ones. the only other things are that it is spelled life and merry-go-round. I liked it nice job.