'Are' hold on each other was solid
(our)

Hesitantly I scream no and fall the wrong way
(now??)

And you 'to had' let go
had to let go...

hey, a few mistakes but it reads pretty well. nice write altogether!

Keep 'Em coming!

Thats so sad, im sending you positvie thoughts, stay strong-xxxx-

Its ok. time may not heal all wouds but it does help. im srry 4 ur loss.

Its quite a poem! ummm, yeah sum mistakes in it but the feelings are there regardless

Amazing poem, I know so much what that feels like. The last two lines are just so... it brings back a lot of feelings for me. It's a powerful, moving poem. xxx

I'm sorry to hear about your loss of your friend. If you ever need anyone to listen, remember, I will always be here for you.

5/5!!

((((((Big Hugs))))))

Michelle

Thanks a lot for the comment. I just put a new one up called Slowly Dying. Check it out.

I really liked this poem. Im sorry about your friend. Best of luck to ya. 5/5

This is a fantstic poem...im so sorry about your friend...if you ever need to talk i'll be here...anyway keep writing...

-Maisha