What?! There's only six parts?!

I was really enjoying myself. Your poems sounds similair to the one I was gonna write of, only this involves a window seeing all around it.

Hahah...you beat me with creativity.

I heart how the moon was used in these three poems. Especially when you described it as being bloody and red.

The only parts that made me cringed was when the cutting part came in.

Excellent, if I can vote twice I would. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Fantabulous work Darien. I'm really pleased to see such excellet work incesstantly coming from the same person. Well done and keep writing (I wish there was a part 7 and 8!) :).

Much love and God bless,
FalLEn*-

P.S
'The faces of the moon,
changing as the story goes.
A story of anger and deciet,
end with murder and suicide'- Thats some nicely written work Darien- I love it! ;D

Wonderful work. All the pieces fit very well together. You did a great job. Keep it up.

That was such a beautiful way to end it, it couldn't be more perfect. it wa ssuch a poetic story and was crafted so well. I just LOVED how the moon stood witness to everything the entire time and you evidently point that out. And the way each section wa snamed and flowed into the other was just perfect. these pieces were just astonishing.

All parts were excellent.... I'm sorry there wasn't more, I was very intrigued by the whole thing. Written wonderfully.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

This part completes the set and I enjoyed reading to the end. A great dark poem for both parts :)

Wow i love how it went from happy to sad, and the last part just was amazing in it self you have been kicken butt on you poems keep it up
-Ash-

Wow, all 3 faces of the moon are excellent!! i loved every moment of it. you are a very talented writer, keep up the good work.
**lisa**

Wow, apperantly I'm going to have to check out the album Boys Night Out. That's some awesome stuff. And just as mine is 'another chapter of a book' yours has chapters aswell. You're an amazing poet.

Hey darl amazing j0b 0n all these piece darl. a great write. amazing w0rk!! keep it up

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
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Ahh wow. Now you killed yourself for killing her..Anyways this was a great series..good job.

Its a nice story! +_+