Wow powerful powerful stuff! very well writtenxxx

Omg i love this poem so much. i felt like i was there. it was so deep and moving. i love all your poems, your such a great writer. xxxjes

Wow this poem is so powerful and descriptive
wonderfuly done
i am amazed
the last stanza really packed a punch

Wow i really was into it .. i felt like i was there and i saw the boy holy crap .. it's amazing very very well writen wonderful work!!

Captivating dark poem

Interesting. Very captivating about the way it happened. A dark story without a doubt. Excellent work.
~Faith

Very discriptive...i felt like i was there.. its amazing...
xxxx
abby