You Lied

by Bloodedroses   Nov 4, 2005


You told me you loved me
You lied
Every time that you hit me
I cried

You said you would protect me
You lied
Used and abused me, that's what you've done...

Now when the morning comes,
And you see what you have done...
Remember
You lied.

As I close my eyes,
I know that this is the last time
That you can lie

Blood will be your reminder.

~For you Adrian.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alicia

    Thats really good. I love it

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted~transistor

    Wow.. isnt cool how you can use real situations in poems like that?
    i kno its not a very good experience and im sorry
    but at leats you can get ur feelings out

  • 18 years ago

    by Koriey Korrupted

    Really dark.This poem flat out tells that you are hurting and want to get even.Again Great Job

  • 18 years ago

    by CrimsonInHumanBlood

    Cool I like it. most girls go through this through their teenage life. thanks for the review BTW. i appreciate it.

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