Comments : YOUR BEAUTY

  • 18 years ago

    by hewholovesherthemost

    I like your poems, i gave this one a five, keep doin what your doin and i'll comment on your other ones

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Thnxs. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Jesus gave me this talent..so i am just using it! glad you enjoy it. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by stephanie

    DAM thats like really really good you should be entering your poems in the weekly poetry contest you could make it like in the top three seriously that poem was RAW!

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I enter ym poems in poetry.com.....so yeaa, they published my poem i love you..its on here you shoudl read it..but thanxs..glad you liek it.

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I jus want to say that this is one of my favorite poems, it comes from my heart; i dedicate this to my friend John..i lvoe you babe...he is my best friend and he has taught me true ove through friendship! please please please comment on this....and not only this but all of my poems they're lonely and besides i didnt write them just to write them, i wrote them to be read by people...the people that could make or break my future career in poetry writing..so thats why its important....plu why shouldi write more if you don't enjoy what you're reading??? so please comment! and vote! LISSA xox

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    So yess this is about john i forgot to finish my thought....this is about how i realized that he means so much to me, he is truely so beautiful and gorgeous to me and i have never felt this way abotu anyone before...xox

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Powerful powerful words. your very talentet its sad so little people have read your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Aww why thank-you aaron. xoLISSAxo

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Caps are not alwayz the best thing to write poetry..im just sayin
    but your wording was great and nice detail
    good job 5/5