Great poem, i gave you a 5 if i can give more i would. great job, keep up the good work.

Wonderfully done!!!

Amazing, that is an excellent poem, it really does touch the reader, and the lines flowed beautifully, Great job, 5/5

Hey shelby, this is a solid well thought out piece of poetry, and oddly for me, i can't quite work out if it's simple about an old partner, or something more philisophical which would explain the ending...perhaps if you have a mind you could tell me.

Only niggle, is the 4th line of the second stanza has to me, two extra syllables that don't seem to fit with the rest of the piece. I'd suggest dropping the second "another" from that line.

regards.

Kevin.