Its a very good poem :-) i like it a lot

Great poem

You might wanna take the -*- out of the title cuz its gonna get deleted!!! and the poems was really good 5/5
Becky
xoxo
and why does your profile say your from south carolina?!?! wierdo lol

Wow...this is sooo significant...5/5 keep up the great work and i love the way u expressed urself in this poem

Your writing has turned very cryptic and sometimes it struggles to make sense. I love the descriptions in this poem; it was really effective but try to make sure you can figure out what the poem is about other than through the title.

I liked your poem alot.

Wow, good stuff. Your use of imagery is really nice.

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