Hello huni, i totally love this poem, i think u r a really great writter, i can really relate to how you are feeling, life is hard and just wen u think it can't get worse it does! but u have to hang in ther ok hun? coz everyone goes thru pain in ther lives but u have to hold on, life is what u make out of it and i u look on the bright side of things then it will come a lot better, plz listen to me and i hope that my advice helps, just try to be happy and live each moment as if it were your last coz u never no what is going to happen.... i would be really happy if u could open up 2 me and tell what your life is about and why you feel so hurt, i hope that u find happiness and im always here if u need someone to talk to

keep shining coz u r very talented

luv Maddy xxx

I wish I can forget everything about him,
The way he smile till the way he frown,
But until then, I won't stop loving him,
Cause he is my one and only true love.

Lol...this is what I come out with...for the last stanza...don't think it's any good...and you might not be able to relate to it to...just thought I give it a shot...anyway...this poem is good...

What about -Mocking Tears or Desperate fears for the title- as for the stanza its something u need tow rit on your own to make it worth while:)

Jenn
what number am i on.. 2?