Very good poem...5/5...though you might want to fix

Youâ??re dead to the world,

the "are" is a little messed up...other then that no imporvment needed!!

I like this, it is dark and kind of scary. I especially like the idea of pain as a sphere, it gives a normally abstract concept tangible shape. Good job, and thanks for your comments!

I really enjoyed this poem, in a dark kind of way.....great work 5/5.

Once again, amazing work. I love your poems.

Good poem but the flow could use some work... Other than that, I love the imagery and concept.

xxEvilAngelxx