Beautiful Blue Eyes

by anthony   Nov 5, 2005


You're tearing me apart,
From the inside, out,
A deafening silence roams throughout me,
I'm holding backthese feelings.
I won't give in to you this time,
I won't let you win.

Your eyes,
Those beautiful blue eyes,
So tempting,
So belittling,
They always find a way to crush me,
They drown me.

Looks like I'm losing once again,
Help me out of this hole I've been digging
Look at me and say you love me
Then we can call it even
And play this game again.
Next time, however,
I'll win.

PS: yes, my screen name is amberpacificc, and yes I -am- the original author of this poem. First poem I submitted..and uh, feel free to comment about it, I'd really appreciate it. Take care.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ambar K

    That was a really nice poem. I hope you’re ok, love is weird it hurts us more then anything and it rewords us too. Check out some of my poems when you get a change and keep writing no matter what anyone tells you.

  • 18 years ago

    by anthony

    Thanks, Val.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Val*~

    I really like this poem. it expresses how you feel and it is wonderfullly worded

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