Continue writing. i miss reading new poems.

You should with out a doubt finish writing this. It's a very well written beginning and there's alot og different ideas you could adopt to develop it.
The last line of the second verse seems slightly forced to me, though. Maybe I'm not reading it right, but something doesn't seem as ..consistent? about it. I'm not really sure, I'm pretty picky though, so I'd take no notice :]
Reading more, deffinitely.x