Lol don't mind me being girly but aww womg that was soooo cute. but ok now that i got that ou of my way it really was a great poem i liked the kind of metaphors you used loved it alot keep it up 5/5

lots of love
☼*~*Becky*~*☼

Very profound! This is a very unique piece, I like it. It's really thought provoking and so deep. Keep it up~Holly

Wow, you're so creative babe, I know I say this every time, but I mean it, you're such an amazing writer. E>. This is really deep and effective, you're so great. Love you hun, keep your chin up. xxx

Take care,
Sarah.x.

Hey there, your poem is really good. it's true having someone special could really do alot in life. keep good.

This strong powerful willed words that u said with grace on this poem was amazing so deep this is the best poem i read in weeks
take care
HS

"Yet somehow, that simple five minutes with someone special,
can give you millions of reasons to want to live forever. "
sooooo true

well done!
i liked this poem alot

"Yet somehow, that simple five minutes with someone special,
can give you millions of reasons to want to live forever. "
i read this and cried
cos now that someone special for me is no longer there... but it reminded me of old times....SO SO TOUCHING

and why does the third stanza make you live?
pls see my poems too...you might like some :)
DHAVAL