I realy enjoyed readin ur poem it was pretty good keep it up look 4ward 2 readin more!

Creative, I like it! Keep it up!

Well done another great poem.

you show four feelings well in your poems, i hope that person does fee the same for u as u do for him!

Jacs
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Great poem...real sweet! keep it up..i luv ur poems theyre so good..keep it up!!:)
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plz comment on mine too fanx!

10/5 this is a very good poem I love it

Heyy great j0b 0n this 0ne t0o. a hyeartfelt piece 0nce again. great w0rk!!

Your poetry is all so sweet and loving, or most of them are anyway, they all have the same feeling of need for that special person, and the feeling that if they leave - there will be nothing left in the world. I love the way you have structured this poem, and the way the rhyme and rhythm varies slightly :)

Peace. [Sole]