Good, good. i really like the lines 'that only disapears on a moonless night' and 'the past rewinds and the memories replay' but i can't figure out my favorite stanza...sorry.

Brad

P.S. i'm hoping you'll tell me the absolute truth. were my poems better before? recently they seem like they're lacking something

I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT UR TALKING ABOUT BUT I KNOW TALENT WHEN I READ IT ; JUST THE WAY THE LINES FLOW WOWWWWWWWWWWW
I LOVE EVERY WORD YOU WRITE
AND I WOULD LIVE ANY MISERABLE
EXISTANCE JUST TO WRITE LIKE YOU
TAKE POETRY CLASSES AND PURSUE AND CAREER IN WRITING YOU GOT WHAT IT TAKES. NO B/S I HAVE NOTHING TO GAIN TELLING YOU THIS SO YOU KNOW IT MUST BE TRUE,

It is a good poem. I liked your choice of words. you are very talented. Keep up the good work.