Jesus Atomic where do I start?...I have to say this is your BEST I have read!! I mean BEST!!!

The perfect man from the books,
A shining armor and white horse too.
One who never loved before,
Until the day he met you.

Loved those lines! And the last one!..I mean..u need to do something with your work..frame it in gold, get it published , something!! This is just beautiful and something a lot of people have been asking for quite some time!...5/5...if I get a chance to rate twice I have too! It's worth 100!
With Love,
~Chelsey~

Jesus Atomic where do I start?...I have to say this is your BEST I have read!! I mean BEST!!!

The perfect man from the books,
A shining armor and white horse too.
One who never loved before,
Until the day he met you.

Loved those lines! And the last one!..I mean..u need to do something with your work..frame it in gold, get it published , something!! This is just beautiful and something a lot of people have been asking for quite some time!...5/5...if I get a chance to rate twice I have too! It's worth 100!
With Love,
~Chelsey~

That was an incredible write Atomic ...
Wow I really loved it..
So much expression in each stanza ...
This stanza really grabbed me :

How often do you wake up,
Realization hits you fast.
True love doesn't have an ending,
Because it was meant to last.

Your poetic ability is truly amazing ....

Never stop sharing this gift ~~

Aww this is sweet. I understand why mine are different from yours. You know how to rhyme well, I'm not very good at it :P I wish I could be a prince to my princess, but I must find her first. :) I like this poem, very creative!

This was awesome you kinda started to get off of our amazing flow at the end though but then the last stanza kinda recovered everything i loved the way you ended this very much, this is really good, i loved the idea with the whole fairy tale theme very nice 5/5

So tru..i wish it all da time...*sigh* o well...gr8 poem..5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

Umm dont really like love poems but that one was pretty good. It wasnt mushy. Comparing men to ones in a fairytell or fantasy was exellent. It gave it a great spin. I may not like love poems but this one was great!

A touch from him made you shiver,
Kissing him made you swoon.
Together your hearts unite,
Under the full yellow moon.

I love that part...
it has a good message towards it
its very well written, its sweet,
I love the ending as well..

nice job ^_^

Wowo gurl u truly r talented this poemz really really gud keep up tha gud work!!!!!5/5

Atomic, -SWEETIE- you've been reading too many Historical Romance Novels... Lay off them so that you stop writing awesome poems about love and stuff... WHY CAN'T I WRITE GOOD LOVE STUFF???!?!?!?! Awesome job lady!!!

~Anthony

OMG atomic this one was really good....shivers girl nearly made me cry. Oh god this is basically gonna inspire me to tell this guy that i still like him...............or not. not game enough lol but great poem!!!
*wink*
luv ya jess xoxoxo

This is...wow!!! There are no words to describe this. Your writing is truly amazing. I Love and considering I want to be a writer... wow!! If you become one I'm not sure I should bother. I can see your book of poems with bestseller written all over it!!!!!

Great poem I love these lines

How often do you wake up,
Realization hits you fast.
True love doesn't have an ending,
Because it was meant to last.

I'm a big-huge fan of the love lasting forever, staying together forever thing. Only thing is I don't want a prince, maybe a knight, but not a prince. I felt a good deal of irony when I read that, because I don't daydream of a perfect guy.