Its pretty good and heartfelt , also true.. the only thing id have to say is alot of grammar errors.. but above all its great! keep it up and thanks for commenting on mine!

When i write poems grammer isnt apart of it...thanxs though LISSA

This simply put is how john makes me feel

I disagree, Lissa. This is very good. Don't doubt yourself. This is the way I feel about someone else who uses this site. He's awesome and so is this poem!!!!!

Wow....interesting...I like this one very much....the words in which are said are just breathtaking...