Awesome!!!!

This was a beautifully sad poem. So well written. Filled with emotions. The words used were very powerful.
Take care,
Luv Riffy xxx

Wow you are a really talented writer...I love your work and i hope you keep writing...

Beautiful great use of descriptive language

GREAT POEM!! god job...i really luv it

Dark...indeed dark but very well written with excellent form. Great job!!!

Wow!!!! you're very good. and this poem....... i just relate to it so much!

This was a good poem and it made me realize certain things and issues that have happened in my life. good job

Sad! makes u want to cry

You are a great poet and writing like that will get you very far in life.

OMG that is so frigin awesome i loved it!

Awesome poem.

"Eyes burned with tears unshed,
Stubbornness won't let it fall.
It hurts from what it sees,
And blinded by what it saw.

Heartache glistens its lashes,
Thousands of tears kept at bay.
Saw all the painful scenes,
But no strength to look away..."

this is my favorite part. you did a great job. propz.

An incredible poem!

Wow that was one of the best I saw.

Good job

I love your peom your deep into want your say

Thats really sad. :[

but your rhyming is really good. like idk i just really like this.

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

I loved it....................so depressing and just touching..............my eyes were attached to the screen

Truly an amazing poem.
Loved it.
10/10