Another great poem... I know a few people that suffer from this disease. Your words are so carfeully and skillfully chosen to describe the torment of this disease!

Simon

Wow, this is excellent! What an impressive read! Fantastic write!

Steven ,
This poem so touched me ....
My hubby's grandma has this disease and I witnessed it's effects often ...
It is a cruel and heartless disease that robs a person of so much ..
This piece really touched my heart and I do hope that a cure is in the near future ....

Steven, I guess we all know someone with this disease. It is a cruel and heartless disease that robs a person of so much...as Luanne said....this truly touched my heart....

I've known about two people in my life that has died from this disease. wonderful job!

~Jacklyn

Very nicely done Steve!!!

Hey... thats cool... i dont really have a very long attention span so it was hard to understand, but the whole deal that it spells parkinsons disease is kinda neat.