Very good literature. i really loved it. ur amazing at poetry, keep it up, seriously.

-Suzie

I really liked this poem... it held me in from the beginning to the end... nice job...

keep writing... 5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Awe Mona....amazing as always. I love everything you manage to put in words...you are an excellent writer girl!!

I love the ''She looks happy but how long can she fake?
While you are sleeping she is sitting there awake.
She's crying and blames herself for her mistakes.
She's still breathing, but she bends and breaks.'' part, its so well said i can really relate to it...