I would DIE to be happy again,
You're probably thinking, "go ahead then".

thats my favorite part. and this is a good poem but to be honest most of the rhymes seem really forced your vocabulary was great and the words you chose to rhyme were unique but they do need to flow together also. anyways imma go with a 4/5 cause i really liked this but too many parts seemed so forced

This is a great poem and i really in love with this poem...u r like soooo good..i love the way that u write...5/5 keep up the good job...just to let u know...i wrote some new poems...keep up the great work

Very nice, emotional poem! Nice job! 5/5!

Nicely written, it flowed well and the emotion was great! keep your head up! 5/5

This is an amazing poem I Really like it. Ur only 14 don't worry about guy's... they suck! wait till they get older they normally mature a bit and of course so do girls hearts... most of the time. What I'm saying is... injoy being single its much more fun... even though a lot of the time it feels like ur all alone... thats mostly just because the people around u got caught in the game way to early!

Very touching poem, easily related too. Keep it up

Oh my gosh.. your an amazing poet.*5/5*

Well written poem, the flow wasn't alwaays constant but the coontnt made up for this

Very well written and i relate aloot, thanks for sharing.