A very well written dark poem..... fantastic flow capturing the imagery of depression
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Great pom

This poems very good. it flows very well. you often find that poems with this rhyme scheme sound quiet forced, but this flows very well.

its very dark an datmospheric. i like it a lot

Hey Lyla,
guess who it is,
this poem is pretty good, but I think you should try a free verse poem for once, just rattle on a little bit. Read my poem for me, k, see how you like.

Wow great job Lyla :) I really liked these two lines:

Hated by everyone, Not worth a dime
Living my life should be a horrendous crime

You have alot of talent and should be proud of yourself :D Thanks again for commenting on my poems, it means alot to me :)
Take care,
Rachelxx

I kinda feel the same way too, I love this poem, well written, good job.