Comments : Clouded Eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    That was another great poem. I was interested all the way through it. Keep em coming!

    Love Chantelle

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I can't find the words to tell you how much I love this poem. I am very envious of the way you can express yourself. I love these lines:
    "The fire turns,
    My heart to ash"
    Again an amazing poem.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    I really cant describe how this poem was it truly was excellent. Your an original brilliant poet you should keep it up! Your one of my favorites now! I wish I could write like you! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    So vivid and full of utter emotion pretty good

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    So vivid and full of utter emotion pretty good