This is amazing
So beautiful...each word is like a piece of heaven you've put your heart and soul into it i love it
keep it up take care
love me xxx

Thank you for your comment that really made me feel better that someone else could relate to that poem and not just me. Everything that was in it happened to me and im very happy that i found that someone to live for like you have. Thanks agian
Sadie

This is a great poem, i love the idea of the chose between the dream and the unknown

I love this poem, and thanks for commenting on my poem it meant a lot to me

I love this poem, and thanks for commenting on my poem it meant a lot to me

So meaningful and heart felt
I love the mystery of it all
Love your work
keep it up
xxx

Beautiful, truely magnificent... A fine piece of literature that clearly emphasizes how you really feel. I hope that writing poetry brings some small measure of peace to you, as it does with me, I think I'll write some poetry just for you and some of the other people that need some counsel and advice. Continue to write and read more of my poems and quotes, you never know if they might suddenly have some of the answers that your looking for out of life.
Much Aloha,
Josh

Wonderful. i loved it. thanks for yor sweet comment on mine. hugs lynne

Very interesting... Your writings are very intricate, although I myself don't get lost in them they stir emotions that reflect how painful my life is at the moment... Your poetry gives me inspiration to write my own pieces at times... Very well written, continue to impress me and I'll impress you with some of my latest works...

Very interesting... Your writings are very intricate, although I myself don't get lost in them they stir emotions that reflect how painful my life is at the moment... Your poetry gives me inspiration to write my own pieces at times... Very well written, continue to impress me and I'll impress you with some of my latest works...

That's an amazing poem. I really loved it! You are great writer...and also thank you so much for your comments they mean so much to me. I have heard that song and that was sort of my inspiration for the poem because you're right that is exactly how i feel. It is great to know you would like to help me, thank you for that too! Never stop writing girl because you are amazing. I love all of your poems tho I may not have time to comment them all!

Truely amasing, one of my favorites, it went to get me...the words are like made to be together...great job!