Comments : The REAL me.

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem.

    and its great that you have stopped cutting :-) well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    That is a very well written poem. An inspiration to a lot of people I would hope. It's good to know that you stop, if you ever did do it. Keep stong, and keep writing. I enjoyed this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megadrive

    That... is very, very cool=D I really like this poem. my only tip is try using ,.! helps the reader pause when u want them to, and break and everything, gives ur poem a since of... beat I guess, and of course makes it more, pretty and just more Organized. other then that great job=D

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*CuT*mY*wRiSt*~

    Nice poem i like it alot keep writing