Oh my, this is deep, I loved it ;o FANTASTIC BRILLIANT WOW, I can definetly relate to this very well done my dear, Your poems do not need critisism they speak for themselves, true beauty love, take care
This is excellent! Very well written and the flow was constint! This is really deep and very sad I liked how you asked if they saw you smile resently.
I loved all your word usage, it was very good and helped the flow. You put so much emotion into this and it turned out really good, you should be proud. well done x)