Comments : The dark

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    You've got a style of your own. Which is very beautiful. I really love this poem, Very very creative, and beautiful. (just a little typo? Maybe starts should be stars?) EXCELLENT :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey this was a great poem!!! i love the flow and the style...its very creative...keep it up!!
    thanks for your comment....

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Very short, but nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Ashley

    Beautiful work, I loved it...you are sooo talented.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Oh I love the last three lines the best. And I think I might have read some of your poems before. *not commented on but read* Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Great imagery and i love the style, i wrote a poem about the dark but from a differnt perspective, its called 'in the darkness sparkles'. xx