Its good

Tearful...... 5/5.. i love it... but of coarse i love mushy poems... thats bout all i write.... lol

Another great poem i like your style im gonna have to read the others :)

Aww thats such a great poem i love it hun! =) keep it up ur really talented! xo

Nearly got me cryin there hun...
know exactly how u feel in this one
keep writing hun, ur GOOD
Damion... x

Fantastic poem mis tasteful keep them coming
gema xoxoxox

Hey there, i love this poem. your words are beautiful. They flow, they arn't like a White Blizzard like mine which means mine arn't really that good. Thankyou for your kind comments. : )