I like it its good not bad like you said
i give it a 5/5+++

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! It makes me think of my fiance.... That was very heart warming....... 5/5

This poem is very good and makes good since

Wow very deep I like it alot :)

Love this poem Taste, Really deep.

May Fav part is : So i am giving all i have to give,
to you...I give my Heart.

Oh bless u hun=)
that was lovely...
honest and deep, well done hun
Damion... x

Gorgeous!! Simple and honest and lovely!! How can anyone not be touched by that!! Love it!! Awesome structure and rhyming!!

Godbless
Sammib

You're too good to be on an average poetry site. your words are more than real.