Nice poem add me to your favorites i gave you 5/5

Very good poem.Great way of writing.This poem gives me some inspiration.Truly.well hope to read more.lataz

Robert Flores aka Switchblade.

Good poem. Very good and the word choices are excellent. Welcome to the website and we willl try to get people to read your poems. C U later

Im young zero

The second to the last stanza is true....I've felt the same way about a girl....thats where I came up with the quote."How come I can see and pick you out of a crowd, but you can't see me even when I'm standing alone?".

I can relate to this alot!
Its a very well written poem!
I loved the flow and how you put emotion in it!
I enjoyed reading this well done!

5/5 x)

Really Great poem. Keep up the good work!!!

Sydni

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Hey. love the poem its great. flows really well and i can see the emotionn behind every word. keep it up, looking forward to reading more
Polly ~X~

Hey. love the poem its great. flows really well and i can see the emotionn behind every word. keep it up, looking forward to reading more
Polly ~X~