Amazing writen poem about love and death such pain in this romance but the love will always show in her tear stained face i do love this piece

I understand what u mean and i love the way that u write..i love how u put your emotions first and everything else 2nd...keep up the great job...i can relate to u alot 5/5

Im sry if this is tru....gr8 poem...5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

The Rhyming in this poem is excellent, and I love the simile "Like a Thin Piece of Lace." Great Job, 5/5

That was a magnificent poem. so strong and bold. i felt it throught to the bones. the rhythm was perfect. it was eerie in a sense. i liked it.

Oh it was great to read right to the end and i found it an interesting piece of work with such talent behind it! A bit sad though....

Wow... i really love this. i think that you are every talented. keep it up!

"NO one knew she was so frail, like a thin piece of lace!" i looove that line. And i also love..."her tears said it all, eh was her depression, when he pretended to fall." aww good job! keep up the talent! yippeee! xox LISSA

Good poem!!! Likes it lotzz
Good work!!

This is a very good poem although it is also very sad! I have a few friends who have wanted to commit suicide over a guy and it's the hardest thing to talk someone out of, but people need to know that it is not worth it! I do like this poem although I hope that it didn't really happen to someone you know.

I love the way you rhymed in this poem.
It shows how two emotions can mix into one.
5/5

Beautifully sad poem. There was so much emotion in this.

I loved this poem your a great writer keep it up 5/5

Again. I'm runnign out of things to say. Great work, it flowed really well and the rhyming was almost perfection. Keep it up!

Peace. [Sole]

Wow.

Hmm awesm